WORLD LOCK: The dune ridge above the base, cold blue sand before dawn. NORTH - a high dune ridge, crest forty metres above the flats, wind combing the sand off every crest. SOUTH - open cold blue flats running to a black horizon, the descending enemy hull burning steady high in that quarter. EAST - the palest band of pre-dawn skyglow lying flat on the horizon. WEST - a black dune field, the deepest part of the night. Named anchors: CENTRAL DOME (thirty metres tall, blistered ceramic, middle of the base), COMMAND DOME (seventy metres east of central), ARMORY DOME (seventy metres west of central, half sunk in sand), OUTER DOME (empty shell, one hundred sixty metres north-west of central, on the perimeter), RIDGE CREST (two hundred twenty metres north of central, forty metres higher), ASHWING PAD (sixty metres north-east of the command dome). SCARECROW stands on the RIDGE CREST, two hundred twenty metres north of the CENTRAL DOME and forty metres above the flats, boots on the crest skin, BODY FACING SOUTH toward the domes. AXIS LOCK: 180-degree line from the RIDGE CREST in the north to the CENTRAL DOME in the south. Camera remains EAST of that line for the whole clip. Screen directions: uphill and north read SCREEN-RIGHT, the base and south read SCREEN-LEFT and far below, the descending star reads high SCREEN-LEFT. [T=0.0-3.2s] SHOT 1 - extreme wide - 32 mm CAMERA: eighteen metres east of Scarecrow, 1.2 m above the crest, east of the axis, looking west across the ridge line. MOVE: STATIC. ACTION: wind combs the crest and lifts long ribbons of sand off it past the standing figure. EYELINE: Scarecrow looks SCREEN-LEFT and down toward the domes. SOUND: hard steady wind, dry sand hiss. HARD CUT at T=3.2s. Scarecrow on the crest facing SOUTH, camera east of the axis. [T=3.2-6.0s] SHOT 2 - wide low - 24 mm CAMERA: twelve metres east, 0.25 m above the sand, east of the axis, looking west at boot level. MOVE: TRACK L 1.5 m. ACTION: a dark pulse travels under the dune skin from SCREEN-RIGHT to SCREEN-LEFT and the sand shivers above it. EYELINE: none in shot, the pulse travels SCREEN-LEFT. SOUND: a deep subsonic thud rolling away under the ground. HARD CUT at T=6.0s. Scarecrow on the crest facing SOUTH, camera east of the axis. [T=6.0-9.0s] SHOT 3 - extreme wide high - 28 mm CAMERA: twenty-five metres east and eight metres above the crest, east of the axis, looking west and down over the flats. MOVE: TILT DOWN 10 degrees. ACTION: three buried foundation rings light under the sand one after another, marking three round domes on the flats below. EYELINE: none in shot, the rings light from SCREEN-LEFT inward. SOUND: the subsonic thud repeating three times, each fainter. HARD CUT at T=9.0s. Scarecrow on the crest facing SOUTH, camera east of the axis. [T=9.0-11.6s] SHOT 4 - medium - 50 mm CAMERA: four metres east of Scarecrow, 0.5 m high, east of the axis, looking west at his legs and boots. MOVE: HANDHELD MICRO-SHAKE. ACTION: the sand around his boots vibrates in fine rings and he plants his weight to feel it come up through the leather. EYELINE: he looks straight down at his own boots, SCREEN-DOWN. SOUND: sand grains ticking against boot leather. HARD CUT at T=11.6s. Scarecrow on the crest facing SOUTH, camera east of the axis. [T=11.6-14.4s] SHOT 5 - medium close - 85 mm CAMERA: three metres east, 1.3 m high, east of the axis, looking west at his chest and hands. MOVE: STATIC. ACTION: he raises both living hands in front of his chest and turns them palm up in the cold blue light, studying the skin. EYELINE: he looks down into his own open palms, SCREEN-DOWN. SOUND: wind flattening the coat cloth. HARD CUT at T=14.4s. Scarecrow on the crest facing SOUTH, camera east of the axis. [T=14.4-17.0s] SHOT 6 - medium wide over shoulder - 40 mm CAMERA: five metres east and slightly behind his right shoulder, 1.7 m high, east of the axis, looking west-south-west past him. MOVE: DOLLY IN 0.8 m. ACTION: his head turns SCREEN-LEFT and settles on the central dome far below, the lit ring under its sand still glowing. EYELINE: Scarecrow looks SCREEN-LEFT and down at the central dome. SOUND: wind, and a low hum coming up from the flats. HARD CUT at T=17.0s. Scarecrow on the crest facing SOUTH, camera east of the axis. [T=17.0-19.6s] SHOT 7 - medium close low - 65 mm CAMERA: two and a half metres east, 1.0 m high, east of the axis, looking west and up at his jaw and skull. MOVE: TILT UP 12 degrees. ACTION: he tips his head back and the orange point high in the southern sky lays a hot line down his cheek. EYELINE: Scarecrow looks high SCREEN-LEFT into the sky. SOUND: wind thinning, a faint far-off burn. HARD CUT at T=19.6s. Scarecrow on the crest facing SOUTH, camera east of the axis. [T=19.6-22.6s] SHOT 8 - wide sky - 35 mm CAMERA: twelve metres east, 2 m high, east of the axis, angled up thirty degrees into the southern sky. MOVE: STATIC. ACTION: a new star comes down through the high cloud far too fast, burning steady and unblinking, dragging a thin straight trail. EYELINE: none in shot, the star travels SCREEN-LEFT and down. SOUND: a distant flat roar arriving late. HARD CUT at T=22.6s. Scarecrow on the crest facing SOUTH, camera east of the axis. [T=22.6-27.4s] SHOT 9 - close - 85 mm CAMERA: two metres east of Scarecrow, 1.6 m high, east of the axis, looking west at his face in three-quarter profile. MOVE: HANDHELD MICRO-SHAKE. ACTION: he speaks one short measured sentence into the wind, jaw and scarred lips moving clearly, eyes staying on the sky. EYELINE: Scarecrow holds high SCREEN-LEFT. SOUND: wind under a steady voice, sand ticking on the coat. HARD CUT at T=27.4s. Scarecrow on the crest facing SOUTH, camera east of the axis. [T=27.4-30.0s] SHOT 10 - extreme wide - 28 mm CAMERA: twenty-two metres east and four metres above the crest, east of the axis, looking west across ridge, base and sky together. MOVE: STATIC. ACTION: the small figure holds the crest while the three lit rings glow far below and the burning point drops toward them. EYELINE: Scarecrow holds high SCREEN-LEFT. SOUND: wind, subsonic hum, distant burn. HARD CUT at T=30.0s. Scarecrow on the crest facing SOUTH, camera east of the axis. END FRAME: extreme wide of the ridge with Scarecrow small on the crest facing south, three ring-shaped glows under the sand far below him and one hard burning point coming down out of the southern sky above the domes. INFORMATION CHANGED: the buried thing under the base has woken and lit its three rings, and Scarecrow has recognised what is coming down out of the sky. NEGATIVES: no on-screen text, no captions, no subtitles, no watermark, no split screen, no crowd in focus, no weapon touching a body, no fingers manipulating small objects, no animals in close-up, no cartoon or neon comic look, no oversaturation.
世界锁定：基地上方的沙丘脊，黎明前冰冷的蓝色沙地。北 - 高沙丘脊，脊线高出平地 40 米，风将沙子从每一处脊顶吹落。南 - 开阔且冰冷的蓝色平地，延伸至黑色地平线，坠落的敌舰在该方位稳定燃烧。东 - 地平线上平铺着黎明前最苍白的天光。西 - 黑色沙丘场，深夜最深处。命名锚点：中央穹顶（高 30 米，起泡陶瓷，位于基地中央），指挥穹顶（中央以东 70 米），军械穹顶（中央以西 70 米，半埋入沙中），外围穹顶（空壳，中央西北 160 米，位于边界），脊顶（中央以北 220 米，高出 40 米），灰翼停机坪（指挥穹顶东北 60 米）。Scarecrow 站在脊顶上，位于中央穹顶以北 220 米，高出平地 40 米，靴子踩在脊顶表面，身体朝南面向穹顶。轴线锁定：从北部的脊顶到南部的中央穹顶的 180 度线。整个片段中摄像机保持在该线以东。屏幕方向：上坡和北方为屏幕右侧，基地和南方为屏幕左侧且位于下方，坠落的星体位于屏幕左上方。[T=0.0-3.2s] 镜头 1 - 极远景 - 32 mm 摄像机：位于 Scarecrow 以东 18 米，脊顶上方 1.2 米，轴线以东，向西跨越脊线拍摄。运动：静态。动作：风梳理着脊顶，将长长的沙带从站立的人物身旁吹过。视线：Scarecrow 望向屏幕左下方，看向穹顶。声音：强劲稳定的风声，干燥的沙粒摩擦声。T=3.2s 处硬切。Scarecrow 在脊顶面向南方，摄像机位于轴线以东。[T=3.2-6.0s] 镜头 2 - 远景低角度 - 24 mm 摄像机：位于以东 12 米，沙面上方 0.25 米，轴线以东，向西拍摄靴子高度。运动：向左平移 1.5 米。动作：一道暗脉冲从沙丘表层下方从屏幕右侧向屏幕左侧移动，沙子在其上方颤动。视线：画面中无，脉冲向屏幕左侧移动。声音：深沉的次声波撞击声在地下滚动。T=6.0s 处硬切。Scarecrow 在脊顶面向南方，摄像机位于轴线以东。[T=6.0-9.0s] 镜头 3 - 极远景高角度 - 28 mm 摄像机：位于脊顶以东 25 米、上方 8 米，轴线以东，向西俯瞰平地。运动：向下倾斜 10 度。动作：三个埋藏的地基环在沙下依次亮起，标记出下方平地上的三个圆形穹顶。视线：画面中无，圆环从屏幕左侧向内亮起。声音：次声波撞击声重复三次，一次比一次微弱。T=9.0s 处硬切。Scarecrow 在脊顶面向南方，摄像机位于轴线以东。[T=9.0-11.6s] 镜头 4 - 中景 - 50 mm 摄像机：位于 Scarecrow 以东 4 米，高度 0.5 米，轴线以东，向西拍摄他的腿和靴子。运动：手持微震。动作：靴子周围的沙子呈细环状振动，他稳住重心感受其通过皮革传导上来。视线：他直视自己的靴子，屏幕下方。声音：沙粒敲击靴子皮革的声音。T=11.6s 处硬切。Scarecrow 在脊顶面向南方，摄像机位于轴线以东。[T=11.6-14.4s] 镜头 5 - 中近景 - 85 mm 摄像机：位于以东 3 米，高度 1.3 米，轴线以东，向西拍摄他的胸部和双手。运动：静态。动作：他在胸前抬起双手，在冰冷的蓝光中将掌心向上翻转，审视着皮肤。视线：他低头看着自己张开的掌心，屏幕下方。声音：风吹平外套布料的声音。T=14.4s 处硬切。Scarecrow 在脊顶面向南方，摄像机位于轴线以东。[T=14.4-17.0s] 镜头 6 - 中远景过肩 - 40 mm 摄像机：位于以东 5 米，略微在他右肩后方，高度 1.7 米，轴线以东，向西南方向越过他拍摄。运动：推镜头 0.8 米。动作：他的头转向屏幕左侧，定格在下方远处的中央穹顶上，其沙下的亮环仍在发光。视线：Scarecrow 望向屏幕左下方，看向中央穹顶。声音：风声，以及从平地传来的低沉嗡嗡声。T=17.0s 处硬切。Scarecrow 在脊顶面向南方，摄像机位于轴线以东。[T=17.0-19.6s] 镜头 7 - 中近景低角度 - 65 mm 摄像机：位于以东 2.5 米，高度 1.0 米，轴线以东，向西仰拍他的下巴和头骨。运动：向上倾斜 12 度。动作：他向后仰头，南方高空中的橙色光点在他脸颊上留下一道灼热的线条。视线：Scarecrow 望向屏幕左上方的高空。声音：风声减弱，远处传来微弱的燃烧声。T=19.6s 处硬切。Scarecrow 在脊顶面向南方，摄像机位于轴线以东。[T=19.6-22.6s] 镜头 8 - 远景天空 - 35 mm 摄像机：位于以东 12 米，高度 2 米，轴线以东，向上倾斜 30 度对准南方天空。运动：静态。动作：一颗新星穿过高空云层，速度极快，燃烧稳定且不闪烁，拖着一条细长的直线轨迹。视线：画面中无，星体向屏幕左下方移动。声音：延迟传来的远处平坦轰鸣声。T=22.6s 处硬切。Scarecrow 在脊顶面向南方，摄像机位于轴线以东。[T=22.6-27.4s] 镜头 9 - 近景 - 85 mm 摄像机：位于 Scarecrow 以东 2 米，高度 1.6 米，轴线以东，向西拍摄他四分之三侧面的脸。运动：手持微震。动作：他对着风说了一句简短而克制的句子，下巴和布满伤疤的嘴唇清晰地移动，眼睛盯着天空。视线：Scarecrow 保持望向屏幕左上方。声音：风声伴随着稳定的说话声，沙粒敲击外套的声音。T=27.4s 处硬切。Scarecrow 在脊顶面向南方，摄像机位于轴线以东。[T=27.4-30.0s] 镜头 10 - 极远景 - 28 mm 摄像机：位于以东 22 米、脊顶上方 4 米，轴线以东，向西同时拍摄脊顶、基地和天空。运动：静态。动作：小小的身影站在脊顶，下方远处的三个亮环发光，燃烧的光点向它们坠落。视线：Scarecrow 保持望向屏幕左上方。声音：风声，次声波嗡嗡声，远处的燃烧声。T=30.0s 处硬切。Scarecrow 在脊顶面向南方，摄像机位于轴线以东。结束画面：脊顶的极远景，Scarecrow 在脊顶上显得很小，面向南方，下方沙中有三个环状光芒，一个强烈的燃烧点正从穹顶上方的南方天空坠落。信息变更：基地下的埋藏物已苏醒并点亮了三个环，Scarecrow 已经认出从天而降的是什么。负面要求：无屏幕文字，无字幕，无水印，无分屏，无焦点人群，无武器触碰身体，无手指操作小物体，无动物特写，无卡通或霓虹漫画风格，无过饱和。
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